Red dots
in the distance
shine brightly through
the dark night
then fade
Archive for the ‘Writing’ Category

Country Lights
March 25, 2010
Carl Sandburg – Chicago
March 11, 2010Chicago
by Carl Sandburg
via carl-sandburg.com
Hog Butcher for the World,
Tool Maker, Stacker of Wheat,
Player with Railroads and the Nation’s Freight Handler;
Stormy, husky, brawling,
City of the Big Shoulders:
They tell me you are wicked and I believe them, for I
have seen your painted women under the gas lamps
luring the farm boys.
And they tell me you are crooked and I answer: Yes, it
is true I have seen the gunman kill and go free to
kill again.
And they tell me you are brutal and my reply is: On the
faces of women and children I have seen the marks
of wanton hunger.
And having answered so I turn once more to those who
sneer at this my city, and I give them back the sneer
and say to them:
Come and show me another city with lifted head singing
so proud to be alive and coarse and strong and cunning.
Flinging magnetic curses amid the toil of piling job on
job, here is a tall bold slugger set vivid against the
little soft cities;
Fierce as a dog with tongue lapping for action, cunning
as a savage pitted against the wilderness,
Bareheaded,
Shoveling,
Wrecking,
Planning,
Building, breaking, rebuilding,
Under the smoke, dust all over his mouth, laughing with
white teeth,
Under the terrible burden of destiny laughing as a young
man laughs,
Laughing even as an ignorant fighter laughs who has
never lost a battle,
Bragging and laughing that under his wrist is the pulse.
and under his ribs the heart of the people,
Laughing!
Laughing the stormy, husky, brawling laughter of
Youth, half-naked, sweating, proud to be Hog
Butcher, Tool Maker, Stacker of Wheat, Player with
Railroads and Freight Handler to the Nation.
Tomorrow I will get on a plane, fly six hundred miles and land at O’Hare International Airport in Chicago, which I have considered to be my second home for nearly two decades.
I could have probably gotten away with spending my Spring Break in Florida, or California, or Nashville, or somewhere else just a little warmer and more picturesque. I wouldn’t have gone to any of those places if someone payed me. I love Chicago and I love flying in from over it, looking at the lights that seem to extend on forever in one direction and cut off at Lake Michigan in another.
I think there is a lot of truth in this poem. Chicago is definitely wicked, crooked, brutal. It is often an ugly city; deteriorating structures, regular murders, corruption, pungent smells rising from the sewers. It is a flawed, extreme environment. But I think all that is part of what makes it truly alive, and in a way humanistic. I don’t think there is more of a realistic amalgamation of what life in the world is really about, with its beautiful sights, ugly blemishes and all.
I will stay for a night in the city proper, go to an Irish punk show on St. Patrick’s Day, and go to the Art Institute of Chicago to look at Monets and Renoirs the next day. I couldn’t be more excited.
This post will be cross-posted on my American Literature class’s blog, You Made Me Theorize.

This Burns
March 9, 2010This, This burns.
Ashes falling, embers licking
searching for fuel
This burns
and then it does not burn.
That, that is the difference.
Staring at city lights
little faraway people in windows
breathing
This punctuates cold, sterile air.
And they pass, some
Some ask for directions
others will go silently into the night
lovers holding hands
travelers with calloused feet
workers on the way back from
building tall towers
And This burns
for where those legs take them
And at This, I laugh
just a little bit
because it is so familiar
They tell me
This, too, shall pass
and I’m starting to wonder
if that’s true.
And This burns
bends, twists through air
Lightheaded
And when This burns out
it doesn’t really burn out
and when I climb the stairwell
and turn out the light
This still burns.

Nasir the Drummer
February 22, 2010Behind a shining kit,
he lets his hands fly free.
Ah! What a peaceful sound.

This is Just to Say…
February 16, 2010“This is Just to Say”
by William Carlos Williams
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
I read this poem and it really threw me for a loop. I know I’ve read it before in some English class somewhere, but I don’t remember any discussion about it. I’ve done a little research and a lot of people seem to view it as having some metaphorical meanings. About the relationship between the author of the note (most seem to think that the poem is written in the form of a note) and who it is supposed to be to, latent sexuality, selfishness, etc.
Maybe my personal interpretation stems from me really liking happy endings and optimistic interpretations of things. I think it’s beautiful and simple. I think it’s even a little romantic. The author knows the other person was probably saving the plums for breakfast, but they eat them anyway. I felt like it was sort of about the give and take of love, because the author feels comfortable enough taking the plums and knows that they will be forgiven, and means to show how much the plums really gave him pleasure.
…But that isn’t completely certain. They sort of issue a command, “Forgive me” as opposed to “I’m sorry.” And once again, the author knew that the other person was probably saving them for breakfast. A friend of mine thinks that the author is even rubbing in the selfish act at the end. “So sweet,” “so cold.” It’s a completely reasonable interpretation. It’s a selfish act. I guess you can look at that selfish act in many different ways.
And I think that is sort of what makes it such a neat little poem; it is ambiguous and can be interpreted in a lot of ways, despite the fact that it is so sparse and bare bones.
My aunt is taking a poetry writing class at Kansas University, and the class used this poem for an exercise. The students were asked to replace words in this poem with other words and to watch the meaning of the poem change. I think part of the reason for the exercise was to show how much every word in a poem counts.
I have taken
the records
that were on
the bookshelf
and which
you probably
wanted
yourself
Forgive me
they were important
so quiet
and so warm
Does anyone else want to try? Thoughts on “This is Just to Say”?
This post will be cross-posted on my American Literature class’s blog, You Made Me Theorize.
-ATB

Stay Focused
January 27, 2010As just sort a cosmetic comment, I really don’t like the way that wordpress auto-formats stuff. Maybe I just haven’t figured everything out yet- upon copying and pasting this work from a word document that it has added spaces between the lines. Which I don’t really like. Does anyone know how to fix this?
But relating more to the work at hand, this was the last fiction I wrote before I had a breakdown some time ago.
Stay Focused
by Alex TB
And then the fortune cookies come to the table, with the check
One, already cracked open.
“Stay focused; keeping to your goals will lead to success.”
Lucky numbers.
The other, absent.
A shrink wrapped packet of air.
Nothing, but it floats in my glass of water.
Thoughts of imported beer, primetime, a rave, the cat, the cubicle.
I was thinking about something else that seemed important, but I’ve forgotten already.
Denise fiddles with her fork in noodles with one hand while doing something on her phone with the other.
I tell a joke, but she doesn’t get it.
I begin to try to explain, but I stop in the middle of the sentence.
“Nevermind. It’s not really funny.”
A TV behind the bar silently shows static.
It’s late, but there are many people.
Chattering, passing plates, eating and drinking, laughing.
The sound levels out into a quiet drone.
I ask her,
“What do you want to do now?”
As I take out my wallet.
“I don’t care,”
she says, without looking up.
Jackson takes care of the bill and we walk.
Grant takes care of a little black dress.
Hamilton, a pack of reds
and Lincoln two scoops of ice cream,
one vanilla and one chocolate.
Below us, vents emitting warm air,
we stand in front of a wall of screens,
licking at the remainder of the cones.
It occurs to me, as I watch them, that I haven’t blinked in minutes
and I don’t feel the need to.
Little faces moving their mouths,
not making any noise.
Wheels spinning, smiling teeth
Fires, stock prices scrolling.
The colors blur together and I space out.
“Remember when George passed out in that alley?”
she says, giggling.
“No,” I say, in honesty.
“I don’t. When?”
“Oh, I don’t remember when. It was a while ago. I thought you would have remembered.”
I try to remember,
try to think back.
Alleys?
It sounds familiar.
I remember a circle of light.
Later, after I finish
she rolls over and falls asleep.
I thought that was my job.
I get out of bed
The room is cold.
I flick the light on in the bathroom and it hurts my eyes, unadjusted.
I open the medicine cabinet
then close it,
and my eyes meet my reflection’s.
We both look down, away.
Little numbers and letters.
I don’t know what they mean.
I pop it anyway and look at the reflection again.
He doesn’t look familiar.
I want to say, “you look different,”
but I know he’s thinking the same thing.
We laugh a little.
I feel like we have to.
I flick the light switch and he goes away.

[Untitled]
March 24, 2008Against a backdrop of
flowery sky
Spongebob opens the door to
his Pineapple.
“I’m ready!”
he says.
He whistles and
makes his way across the sand to
Squidward’s house.
Tanks roll across
the border
Mortars fire off bombs as
soldiers plug their ears
“Everything is going as planned.
We are taking control.”
In green night vision
missiles whiz from large trucks into
windows of buildings.
People run.
“Really, this is no problem.
A minor situation.”
She claws for the remote, which I surrender.
“In other news, Brit-“
Squidward is not amused.
He plays a
slow serenade on his clarinet to
drown out
Spongebob’s incessant voice.